I chose this topic(school uniforms) for our writing chain because we debated about this topic and I thought we could be more creative by thinking and reveiwing this topic again. As I expected, my classmates had a lot of ideas about this topic. Firstly, when I started this essay, I devided into three reasons why school uniforms are useful, educational, social and economical side. Honestly, I was little worried if we can continue our essay according to those factors but those worries were not actually needed !!! Even though there were some sentences which didn't continue the story, this essay was really fluent overally. I cut some lines and edited things which didn't go fluently, so plz understand if your lines are different or not here :)
In my opinion, school uniforms should be used in Korea. Actually, there a lot of opposing arguments against this position, but there is no stronger reason to persuade me.
To start with, I'll devide my argument into educational, social and economical factor. Wearing school uniforms help students to be more educational. As student's major duty is to study hard, students should be focusing on their duty. Allowing studentsto wear as they want can lead them into unecessary interests and field other than studying. Of course, students have rights and freedom but all of those come after duty and responsibility. Not caring about their major duty and being not responsible as student will not help them with anything. To learn how to be responsible, they must learn to focus on their work. In addition, school uniforms hlep students recognizing their school and to study because wearing school uniforms make them think they are in school and makes them feel more responsible as a student.
Socially, wearing school uniforms can also lessen feeling of alienation among students whose families are not rich. They cannot afford to buy expensive, trendy clothes. They might feel they are different and isolated just because of their clothes. Also, somestudnets can be distubed by other's stylish clothes. As I mentioned before, school is a place to study not a place to do a fasion show orto discriminate or disturb others by clothes.
And this social factor is related to third argument, economical areas of this issue. Wearing school uniforms can reduce the costfor clothes. Once they buy school uniforms, there are no needs to buy more clothes or to worry about clothes. Thinking of the total amount of the money, buying school uniforms are much more beneficial than buying clothes as teenagers are growing rapidly and trends are changing frequently.
To sum up, school uniforms should beused in Korea because first, they give responsibilities, unity to students. Also, students can stay more friendly with others, and lastly, school uniforms are beneficial in ecomically. Korea should not change their policies about school uniforms and just keep go on with today's policies.
In my opinion, school uniforms should be used in Korea. Actually, there a lot of opposing arguments against this position, but there is no stronger reason to persuade me.
To start with, I'll devide my argument into educational, social and economical factor. Wearing school uniforms help students to be more educational. As student's major duty is to study hard, students should be focusing on their duty. Allowing studentsto wear as they want can lead them into unecessary interests and field other than studying. Of course, students have rights and freedom but all of those come after duty and responsibility. Not caring about their major duty and being not responsible as student will not help them with anything. To learn how to be responsible, they must learn to focus on their work. In addition, school uniforms hlep students recognizing their school and to study because wearing school uniforms make them think they are in school and makes them feel more responsible as a student.
Socially, wearing school uniforms can also lessen feeling of alienation among students whose families are not rich. They cannot afford to buy expensive, trendy clothes. They might feel they are different and isolated just because of their clothes. Also, somestudnets can be distubed by other's stylish clothes. As I mentioned before, school is a place to study not a place to do a fasion show orto discriminate or disturb others by clothes.
And this social factor is related to third argument, economical areas of this issue. Wearing school uniforms can reduce the costfor clothes. Once they buy school uniforms, there are no needs to buy more clothes or to worry about clothes. Thinking of the total amount of the money, buying school uniforms are much more beneficial than buying clothes as teenagers are growing rapidly and trends are changing frequently.
To sum up, school uniforms should beused in Korea because first, they give responsibilities, unity to students. Also, students can stay more friendly with others, and lastly, school uniforms are beneficial in ecomically. Korea should not change their policies about school uniforms and just keep go on with today's policies.
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